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#31 Storygeek

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Posted 06 December 2003 - 09:36 PM

I took a few moments to interpet this and I see that the definition of peace is mistakened by war in this society somehow. We fight for peace lest people die. Kind of hypocratical

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#32 Jaylu

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Posted 07 December 2003 - 05:02 PM

Thanks for the comments Eyes on Me and Final Fanatic. Yeah, I'll have to ask a mod to see if I can change the topic of this post.
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Posted 28 December 2003 - 08:44 PM

Since the poetry contest is over, I'll post the poem that I entered. Sorry for the double post, but no one would see this otherwise. :)

Temptation

Sleepless nights and tempting dreams
Plague my sleep and blight my thought.
My resistance has become folly it seems.
Everyday I become more distraught.

Endless hours and torturous seconds
Fill my days and test my patience.
The more I refuse, the more it beckons.
Every second decays my conscience.

The light of day is no longer visible.
The further I reach, the faster it flees.
There is but one path left reasonable.
It must be taken or I will never be free.

My torment and pain ends for now.
My mind is free from temptation.
Though, I feel I am deceived somehow,
As if my relief is just illusion.

Sleepless nights and haunting dreams
Invade my sleep and disturb my thought.
My acquiescence has become folly it seems.
Everyday I become more distraught.

Each day I experience a vision.
Each night I relive my decision.

I can't wait for a second contest!
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#34 Eyes on me

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Posted 28 December 2003 - 09:05 PM

You're right about that... Your thread was long gone... :lol:

But anyway... That poem is so good...
Those last two sentences are so deep!!

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#35 Fanatik

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Posted 14 March 2004 - 07:45 AM

Temptation is awesome man

so tell me, why did you stop writing, or at least posting?

In the words of Wakka: "A summoner with bedhair?! Whats the world coming to?!"

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